Suzanne'sWriting

I feel that this piece should have more editing. I think i did O.K. on this piece but it could have been better. My next step is





I feel good about my story because i did good figurative language. I did a very nice lead for example : One spooky Halloween night. My next step is punctuation and paragraphing.My lead has improved this year for example.At the beginning of the year:it was night.middle of the year :One dark spooky halloween night. I feel good about my story because i met the standard. I made a good ending for example:From now on i will keep my retainer safe thought Jeremy.My next step is punctuation and paragraphing.My spelling has improved this year for example.At the beginning of the year:comte this year:computer.



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