Ania's+Writing

I am proud of this writing piece because I had a lot of word choice, dialogue and my story was sequential. Something I would like to work on in this writing piece is to focus more and use literary language. Well, this piece of writing was my first one, so I didn't do my best. I feel okay with this piece of writing because I used dialogue and description. But I think I could do better at using dialogue with reason. I didn't really do my best. I improved at my dialogue. I feel good about this piece because I used good description and dialogue. I think I could use figurative language. I think I did well. I improved at using dialogue with reason. I think I could do better and use more figurative language. I did well at paragraphing and similes. I would like to would like to work on word choice. I've used more description. I've learned how to use more detail. I improved a little bit on figurative language. I feel that this is the best writing I've written because I put a lot of effort in it. I've done well at word choice, details, paragraphing and a little figurative language. I would like to work on figurative language. I've used more detail and dialogue.I've learned how to use figurative language. I improved at my word choice.

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I am really proud of this persuasive speech. I did really well at writing what is happening. I also did well at description. I would need to work on my dialogue. I improved in description. I feel great about this piece. I think I told a lot of information in my book I could use more description to describe words that most people don't know. I improved in my description. I feel so good about this piece of work because I used descriptive words. I could work on