Philip's+Writing

I feel like I did a good job for a first story. I had a good middle in this story because in that part I started to build a relationship with my friend. My goal is to work on organising my work. I feel confident with that piece because its published and I used a lot of time to do it.I have done very clear neat writing.I had a theme in it.I think I should put more dialogue and less description in my next story and have a more balanced story.I have improved my word choices to make the reader feel like they are in the story.I learned that having a storytellers voice is a lot funner to listen to.



I feel nervous because I'm trying to make it funny and maybe people won't like it. I have done a lot thinking about the funny parts because I tried to compare normal words with funny words in the middle of the story. I should check in my dictionary more because I mess up spelling. I got better at leads to hook the reader to the story. I learned that revision and editing are most important. My speech on google

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I feel like I did a really good job on this story because I wasted no time on finishing it. I had a good time period section in the book because I made a timeline out of shapes. My goal is to have more information on each page. I feel like I did a good job because I had a lot of details. I had a good middle because I explained my information. My goal is to put more dialogue.