Joel'sWriting

I feel proud of my writing because I think I did a good job with my dialogue. I think I did a good job on my dialogue. My goals/next steps are to introduce my characters better. MY writing has improved by better spelling.

I feel proud of my writing because I think I did a good a job on writing it bit by bit. I think that I did a good job doing it bit by bit. My goals/next steps are to do more paragraphing. My writing has improved by writing it bit by bit.

I feel proud about my writing because I think it was a good small moment story. I think that I did a good job on doing it bit by bit. My goals/next steps are to use better word choices. My writing has improved by more paragraphs and a better ending.

I feel proud about this piece of writing because I really liked the main idea. I think that I made my story bit by bit and I think that I spelled my words correctly. My goals/next steps are to have a balance of details by not having too much dialogue! My piece has improved by having paragraphs because in my other pieces I didn't do so good paragraphing, for example now I am doing paragraphs when I am supposed to and in my other pieces I barely even did paragraphs. By writing this piece I learned to use paragraphs all the time when you're supposed to.

I feel proud about my on demand piece because I thought it was a great piece of writing. I think that I did good paragraphing, and I also think that I did a good ending I also did my organisation good. My goals/next steps are to write better leads, to use interesting words and to use figurative language. My pice has improved by doing my organisation better and my paragraphing much better for example on my RF published piece I did paragraphing most of the time and now I did it all the time!!! By writing this piece I learned to use paragraphs all the time

media type="custom" key="26152592" [|My speech on google] I feel proud of it because I think it is a really good story. I think that I did a good job on my spelling. My goals/next steps are to revise what I should keep or take away in my speech. My writing has improved by more paragraphing.

I feel proud because I thought it was a good speech. I think that I did a good job paragraphing I also think that I did a good job on my organisation. My goals/next steps are to make my ending a bit better. My piece of writing has improved by better paragraphing, for example in my Persuasive Speech I wrote my paragraphs a lot now I write them even more. By writing this piece I learned to write paragraphs at each new reason.

I feel proud because I think this was one of my best stories. I think I did a good at making a lead, and elaborating. My goals/next steps are to use figurative language. My writing has improved by elaborating more. By writing this piece I learned to elaborate more. I feel proud of my piece because I think I did a good job on my elaboration. I think I did a good of doing my Introduction and my conclusion. My next steps/ goals in writing are to write more transitions. I can see that my writing has improved because now I am writing better endings. By writing this piece I learned to write more transitions.