Sebastian'sWriting

I didn't do a very good on that pice of writing (i got a 1) But I think i did a good job on volume and stamina. I can improve on punctuation and I need to focus more. I think i did good on lead and bit by bit. The door, was a pretty good book in my opinion. I did bit by bit on that story. the lead was good in that story. I feel good about this piece of writing.I also got a 3 on that writing.I did a good word choice. I feel good about my on demand writing. Because i did a very good ending.I also did a good word choice.

media type="custom" key="26155190" [|My speech on google] I think i did good on lead,spelling and elaboration. My goal is to put more transitions. I think this is the best book i have wrote. I think I did a very good lead, organisation, and elaboration. I feel proud about this peice of writing,I think i did a good job at pharagraphing.I think i should work on spelling and hand writing. I did good lead,ending,transitions,elaboration and i did many details.