James'Writing





I don't feel the best about this piece of writing but I am working on a fix-it piece for it so It will be better. I thing I should elaborate more and work on more details. I feel great about this piece of writing! I got a 4 and I am very happy about that. Again I think I had a very good word choice, but, a goal for me would be a stronger ending. I feel really good about this piece of writing because I used really strong words such as staggered and occurred. A goal for me would be writing stronger endings.

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I feel good about piece of writing. I got a 3, and that means I met the third grade standards. But I also think that I could have done better in putting my own opinions into it. (Goal) I feel good about this piece of writing because I described and I even used a few live diagrams. It was about making paper airplanes. A goal for me would be to elaborate. I feel okay with this piece of writing because I used a lot of descriptions like what position I was in when Jakob crossed it to me. My strengths were description and paragraphing. I think I could have made it longer. My ending was better.