Yesol'sWriting

I feel like I need to learn a lot. Because I'm not using the stuff I need to use. For this piece of writing I used dialogues, actions and thinkings. I think I could do better with grammar, powerful endings. I feel like this is a lot better than the first writing piece I wrote. For this piece of writing I used a lot of details. I think I can to better with a powerful ending. I feel a bit proud of myself, because I used stuff that I learned while I was writing realistic fiction stories. For this piece of writing I used actions,dialogue,spelling. I think my goals are to write more strong words and use transitions. In this piece of writing,I feel like I learned a lot from this unit and did a good job. Because I really know what you need to use for the realistic fiction story. I think for this piece of writing I used good endings and a meaningful lesson. My goals are to use more transition words.

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I feel kind of proud of this writing because I learned how to write a persuasive writing. I think I have done good story to go with reasons. I think I could do better with the stuff that supports the reasons. I feel like I really learned how to write nonfiction writing. I think I have a lot of information in my writing. I think I can do better with the spellings. I feel great about my facts because I think they really match my main idea. For this piece of writing, I used good leads and ending. I think i could do better with more details and diagrams or picture. I feel good about my punctuation. Because did them accurately. For this piece of writing I used organization and punctuation. I think I could do better with developing my heart of this story.