Zelma's+Writing

I feel happy about this story because I analysis it and it made to really make progress in my work of writing. I think I did well because since second grade and then on to 3rd grade I have been pushing farther. My goals/next step are to do the story part on by one and to put it into more since and better punctuation. My writing has improved by learning my strengths and to get a hold of them. I feel sad about this story because Rosie was one of my best friend and now she's gone taken away from me sadly. I think I did well because I pushed my self farther. My goals/next step are to do more dialogue. My writing has improved by doing the writing piece one by one. (parts of the story) I feel happy about this story because it takes me to one of the best things I did. I think I did well because my dialogue was clear. My goals/next step are to put more description. My writing has improved by pushing myself farther. I feel happy about this story because it has some scary ness in it. I think I did well because I love doing scary stuff. My goals/next step are to put more description. My writing has improved by pushing myself farther. I feel about this story because I think I did well because My goals/next step are to My writing has improved by media type="custom" key="26153200" [|My speech on google] I feel good about this story because I love to fight for what it needs to be or just for fun. I think I did well because I love pets. My goals/next step are to My writing has improved by I feel about this story because I think I did well because My goals/next step are to My writing has improved by I feel happy about this story because I love dogs. I think I did well because I have a dog and also I knew somethings about dogs. My goals/next step are to put effort. My writing has improved by pushing myself. I feel about this story because I think I did well because My goals/next step are to My writing has improved by I feel about this story because I think I did well because My goals/next step are to My writing has improved by