Cami'swriting

I feel horrible about this story because it is short, and looks like what I hate. What I did in this piece of writing is, I had a powerful ending, and stamina volume. My goal in this piece of writing is to, focus, do it bit by bit, and build tension. I don't feel great about this story because I didn't really put a lot of detail. I still like this on demand piece of writing because it is organised and I'v got good spelling in it. My goal in this piece of writing is to add more details, ect.

I think it is a good writing but i could do better. In this piece of writing i made good paragraphs. My next step in this story is to write it more focused to make it a small moment story.

It is a good story but it is short. I think i did this story bit by bit. My steps in this story are to make a longer story.

I made a good story mountain but i can make it better. I think i wrote step by step every part of my story. My next step in my story mountain is to use it more to make my story more focused. media type="custom" key="26154856" [|My speech on google]

I don't feel so comfortable about the writing so much because I kind of didn't use only my own words. Some parts I feel great because I feel I actually teached the reader about basketball. My next step will be to write all of it in my own words.

NOT COMPLETED I fill great about this piece of writing because I wrote enough, and it looks like what I wanted it to be. What i did in this piece, is I put, lead, transitions, ending, organised sequence of events, spelling. My goal is to, show instead of telling, stay in story telling using thoughts, dialogue, actions, together, commas in dialogue.