David'sWriting

I think i did a kind of bad job because I was rushing through it. I feel disappointed because I was not careful while writing the story. My goals are to work on transitions, speling, punctuation, and paragraphs. I feel proud of this story because I had better spelling. I think I did well in this story because I used dialog. My goals are to use more transitions. I improved in this story because my hand writing was easier to read and I had better punctuation.

I feel proud of this story because I had better spelling, and punctuation. I think I did well in this story because I told details and not just said //I woke up and went to school.// My goals are to work on transitions, and punctuation. I improved in this story because I had better spelling, and punctuation but not good enough to meet the third grade standards. media type="custom" key="26155362" [|My speech on google]

I feel really good because I code the right topic and I knew the plan in my mind so I din't need to stop and think. I think I did well because I used transitions. My goals are to work on punctuation, and work on my spelling. I improved because I had better spelling and punctuation but not good enough to meet the third grade standards. I feel happy because I did my best work and have it done on time. I think I did well in this story because I have written it bit by bit. My goal is to work on my lead, more transitions,paragraphs, literary language, and editing for spelling and punctuation. In this story I improved because I told the specific details.