Noelle'sWriting

I feel good about this piece because I had a good lead I think I did a good job telling the story bit by bit My goals are temporal words and phrases While writing this piece I learned what stamina is I feel good about this piece because I wrote bit by bit I think I did a good job doing spelling My goal is paragraphing My piece of writing has improved by oriented readers While writing this piece I learned how to add thoughts I feel good about this piece of writing because I used stamina and volume I told my story bit by bit I balanced dialogue, actions and thoughts My goals are to use temporal words and phrases,commas in dialogue,paragraphing My writing has improved by my stamina and craft By writing this piece I learned to write more neatly I feel good about this piece of writing because I used a good lead,ending and spelling I think I did a good job with my lead My goals are to paragraph My writing has improved by balancing details While writing this piece I learned what is elaboration

media type="custom" key="26169504" [|My speech on google] I feel good about this piece because when I was typing it, I knew that it would be my best piece I think I did a good job doing my punctuation My goals or next steps are to have a better conclusion, spelling and craft This piece has improved by craft While writing this piece I learned to be patient I feel good about this piece because I think dogs are better I think I did a good job telling an opinion My goals are paragraphing My piece has improved by telling the story bit by bit While writing this piece I learned how to write a persuasive speech I feel good about this piece because the nice pictures were added and it was typed I think I did a good job typing My goals are paragraphing My writing has improved by more details By writing this piece I myself learned more about German Shepherds I feel good about this piece because it was cute I think I did a good job doing my ending My goals are using a teaching voice My writing has improved by details By writing this piece I learned more about Labradors

I feel good about my piece because I finally used elaboration I think I did a good job doing my spelling My goals or next steps are my ending,organization (paragraphing) punctuation, craft My piece of writing has improved by my strong lead By writing this piece I learned how to revise my story